Wednesday, May 13, 2009
Self Evaluation #3
Since this was my third speech overall it was better. First off I was much more confident and comfortable during the speech. During the speech the audience didn’t feel like strangers, as it did my first, but in fact classmates. I didn’t have to talk in front of room with people I didn’t know. I was very confident during my speech because I knew my topic well. Even though I felt as if I wasn’t prepared enough I felt that through my research I knew my topic.
From watching the video I learned a lot. During the duration of the speech I mentioned source citations about three times—once at the beginning, middle, and at the end. In my last speech about dining etiquette I learned that I looked and depended too much on the computer screen and the projector. During this speech that I just had I had learned not to do this and focus on my audience instead. While watching the video I really didn’t notice myself doing anything distracting which is an improvement from the last speech I said when I didn’t look enough at my audience. While watching over the video I also noticed that there were some slight differences between the informative speech and the actuative speech. During the actuative speech I looked more at the audience. Anotehr good thing I did was having a more effective powerpoint because I remember in the last speech there were too many text effects which overall distracted me from presenting my presentation. I really couldn’t think of anything majorly bad that I did during the actuative speech.
My speech I believe was very successful. I was able to achieve the purpose of my speech. During the speech I also believed that I maintained good contact with my audience and I didn’t depend on my notecards and powerpoint so much. For this speech I would rate my eye contact as a 9.5 on a scale of 1-10.
Overall this speech was better than my first and second speech. Even though I was short on time to study my speech thoroughly and to prepare and run through my speech I believe that this speech overall went really well. On a scale of A to F I would give myself an A-. I surely did improve from my last speeches but for some reason I just felt like I lacked the energy of some kind to get a strong A. For example, during some parts of the speech I was hesitant on what to say, or I kept repeating myself. Based on all three speeches I would definitely say this was my best speech. With each speech I did I drastically improved from the one before and fixed my previous mistakes. For example, in my informative speech when I looked too much at the screen and not the audience. If I had to do this speech over again I would probably just prepare more at saying my speech aloud.
Discussion 16.3: Concepts
Tuesday, May 12, 2009
Discussion 16.2: Class Lessons
Discussion 16.1: Favorite Speech
Saturday, May 2, 2009
Discussion 15.3: Persuasion in Life
Friday, May 1, 2009
Discussion 15.2: Chapter Concepts
Monday, April 27, 2009
Discussion 15.1: Speech Buddy
Friday, April 24, 2009
Discussion 14.3: Chapter 14 Concept
Thursday, April 23, 2009
Discussion 14.2: Persuasion
Wednesday, April 22, 2009
Discussion 14.1: Next Speech
Saturday, April 18, 2009
Discussion 13.3: Flickr
Discussion 13.2: Speech Buddy Videos
Wednesday, April 15, 2009
Discussion 13.1: Chapter Concept
Saturday, April 11, 2009
Self-Evaluation #2
Throughout the speech I felt much more confident than I was in my first speech. One factor was that I knew the audience more this time around. This made me feel more comfortable and confident during the speech. During the speech I wasn’t as nervous as I was the first time. I was confident I knew the information well for my presentation but my fallback was that I put my attention on my notes and powerpoint for security. During the speech I mentioned about 3 source citations. I mentioned my sources more toward the beginning of the speech rather than at the end. In the beginning of the speech I was more confident and knew the information better and near the end of the speech while watching over my video I noticed that I was rushing more to get my presentation done. During the speech the only thing I did distracting was facing my back towards the audience instead of against them. During the whole presentation I looked at my visual too much rather than at my audience.
If I had to do the speech over again I would make changes in my preparation, and delivery. In my preparation, next time I would try to practice the whole presentation instead of just practicing parts of the presentation so that I am more aware of my time. During this presentation I did go over about 1.5 minutes so going over the speech and practicing time management would surely be a change. In my delivery I would try to limit my visual more. In my powerpoint I had a lot of words and pictures that I couldn’t explain thoroughly. I had put too much wordy information on my slides which I will try to limit next time. One specific different thing from my last speech that I did in the recent speech was having a visual that was technology based. For my cultural artifact speech I just brought in my artifact and for this speech I prepared a powerpoint presentation. A bad thing that I did differently this time around was not completely going over my speech like I did during the first presentation. Not practicing the whole presentation all at once made me feel pressed for time and in the end I went over my time limit.
I have many goals for my next speech. To improve the content in my next speech I plan to use more pertinent sources. So far the information in my speeches has relied a lot on the internet so I plan to use sources such as newspapers, magazines, and journals. To improve the delivery in my next speech I plan to prepare and practice my speech beforehand. I also plan to present my speech in front of a few people so I can ask for feedback and improvements before I present to the actual class.
Based on my performance I would give myself a B on my presentation. During the presentation I had a powerpoint as my visual. The drawback of the powerpoint though was that I was relying on the computer screen or projection screen for information which resulted in less eye contact to the audience. Given this fact I would rate my eye contact as a 6-7 out of 10 because instead of looking at the computer I should have been paying attention to my audience more. Another fallback about my presentation was that my speech was a little bit too long. To me it just felt like I was trying to fit a lot of information into a 5-6 minute speech. Overall I felt as if this speech was better than my last speech. During this speech I was more confident and I had more reliable sources.
Friday, April 10, 2009
Discussion 12.2: Chapter 11 Concept
Wednesday, April 8, 2009
Discussion 12.1: Re-Presenting my Speech
Saturday, March 21, 2009
Discussion 9.3: Intro and Conclusion
Thursday, March 19, 2009
Discussion 9.2: Chapter Concepts
Monday, March 16, 2009
Discussion 9.1: Speech Buddies
Saturday, March 14, 2009
Discussion 8.3: Facts and Statistics
Friday, March 13, 2009
Discussion Week 8.2: Speech buddies
Discussion Week 8.1: Reading Concept
The aspect of the chapter reading that struck out to me the most was the part about “Using Popular Media Sources as Illustrations and Examples.” As speakers we are always trying to find ways to entertain the audience so adding popular media is a wonderful way to achieve the entertaining aspect of a speech and to also to grasp the audience’s attention. Popular media sources embedded into a presentation can include video clips, still photos, audio clips. During presentations I always find that when a person adds popular media to their presentation or when they simply make power point slides, that it is easier to understand that speakers main goal and purpose and also to be interested in the individuals topic or speech.
Saturday, March 7, 2009
Self-Evaluation for Cultural Artifact Speech
After watching my video there was many things I noticed about my delivery. The most notable was looking down too much. Even though I knew all the information on my note cards and in the outline I looked down excessively. Sometimes I even paused to regain my thoughts and think about what the next thing I had to say was. I also noticed that I could have added a little more dynamics to my presentation or the way in which I presented the material. I don’t think that I did anything distracting in my video tape however more importantly I didn’t do things that would make my presentation more interesting to the audience. For example more eye contact. I would rate my eye contact for this presentation as a 6 on a scale of 1-10. Even though I managed to look at my audience I still looked down a lot to make sure the information I was telling my audience was correct. After watching my video of my speech I also noticed how many source citations I mentioned during the course of my speech. During my speech I managed to do an oral citation once. I did have other sources to cite on my note cards but what held me back from mentioning them in my speech was trying to keep under the time limit.
Overall I think I did a good job on the cultural artifact speech. As an introductory speech for a public speaking class I felt as if my speech was a good starting point to continue to grow as a public speaker. On a scale from A to F I would give myself a B based on what I noticed from the video tape. Overall I did a good job following an organizational pattern and overall informing my audience about my cultural artifact however I was lacking in several areas such as dynamics, eye contact, and citations. I also was lacking in confidence especially in the introduction and conclusion of my speech where I should have been prepared more for that aspect of my presentation. If I had to do this speech process over again I would make several changes. In my preparation namely I would go over my speech several times out loud to make sure I was comfortable saying it out loud. In my delivery of my speech I would particularly focus on maintaining eye contact with my audience and having more dynamics to my presentation.
Saturday, February 21, 2009
Discussion Week 5.3: Chapter 5 Concept
Wednesday, February 18, 2009
Discussion Week 5.2: Speech Buddies
In the Light Pollution introduction by Courtney she seemed a little nervous and I noticed that most of her attention was on the podium and not her audience. To be able to affectively speak well I believe that eye contact to the audience is important. However Courtney did have a good introduction in that she summarized the main points in her introduction.
From watching the videos I learned that visual aids are affective and that it is important to maintain eye contact with the audience. I also learned that having an effective introduction and conclusion is important.
Tuesday, February 17, 2009
Discussion Week 5.1: Audience Analysis and Adaptation
Thursday, February 12, 2009
Discussion Week 4.3: Chapter 6 Concept
Tuesday, February 10, 2009
Discussion Week 4.2: Speech buddies
Monday, February 9, 2009
Discussion Week 4.1: Research Interviews
During Junior High and College I have had a good amount of experience conducting research interviews. For an eighth grade research paper we had to learn more about a profession/ job that we were interested in learning more about. I decided to learn about the disk jockeys on the radio. This was one of the most rewarding academic experiences for me. For this project I was able to visit the Live 105.3 studio and interview Jared, a popular Disk Jockey on this alternative rock station. Along with conducting the interview I had a full tour of the studio in San Francisco where I was able to see how everything worked. For this project I also was able to visit 89.3 KOHL, a local college radio station, and interview the main person in charge. For the second project I interviewed a teacher’s aide about a teacher/student formed band at the school. In college I had experience interviewing two professors with a fellow classmate for my MUSE class called play and creativity.
Things that went well:
There were many things that went well. For each interview I did research beforehand and prepared and organized the questions that I was going to ask. The interviews overall went smoothly from beginning to end since I had secondary questions in case the interview started losing momentum. I also was able to conduct the interview within a reasonable time limit which is important especially when the person being interviewed has different agendas to attend to.
Things that needed improvement:
The most needed improvement was learning how to control my nerves and to be confident in my interview. In any kind of situation where I do not know the person well or just met I just need to be confident in conducting myself.
Here’s some advice:
1) During an interview it is important to bring a voice recorder. These instruments are a great resource to making your interview go smoothly. Just make sure to ask permission before your interview if you can use it. Also test your recorder out before using it during the actual interview.
2) My second advice to everyone is to make sure you know a little about the person and what they specialize in or do. This is important if you want to formalize questions that will greatly be beneficial to the interview and spark the interest of the person you are interviewing.
3) The last advice is to thank the individual before and after the interview for their time.
P.S. I am so sorry that this post is so long but I hope that it's beneficial.
Wednesday, February 4, 2009
Discussion Week 3.3: Chapter 2 Concept
Tuesday, February 3, 2009
Discussion Week 3.2: Public Speaking Apprehensiveness
Monday, February 2, 2009
Discussion Week 3.1: Speech buddies
Saturday, January 24, 2009
Public Speaking/ Brief Bio
Hello everyone! My name is KiwiMango. I am currently a freshman majoring in Business Administration/MIS. I also plan to minor in photography. I live on campus and I am enjoying the whole experience of dorm life (although I do take occasional trips home on the weekend). In my spare time I enjoy playing the piano, guitar, and learning new instruments. I also enjoy watching movies, hanging out with my friends, and playing various sports. I like various genres of music and I like to explore undiscovered or little known bands.
Public speaking has been mandatory in my life starting in elementary school. In elementary school I remember presenting book reports and various projects. In high school a lot of my public speaking roles were done in groups however I had some experience speaking individually. The longest presentation I ever presented in front of a class was 15 minutes about a famous person that inspired us in our lives as part of my 11th grade semester long project. I have also had some experience helping lead faith formation classes to my peers.
Public speaking has never been a strong point for me in my life. I am always scared to speak in front of large audiences afraid I would mess up or stumble on my words. Gradually I am getting over this fear. My main goal for this class is to be comfortable when speaking to an audience. When presenting, I often get to the point where everything becomes a blur and I start to loose focus and forget what I’m saying. In large groups I also want to be able to speak my mind freely. Overall I just want to be confident with my public speaking abilities and am hoping that this class will help me to reach this goal.